Tracks, fields, and walls

John Kenny

John Kenny

Track & Field by Cormac James. New Island, 192pp. £8.99

The proof of the integrity of a work of literature very often lies less in what is included as material than in what is omitted. The authenticity of the Koran is evinced, Borges insisted, in the fact that it does not mention camels - they were so completely endemic that they were not assumed noteworthy. The point applies, or at least should apply, to historical fiction, especially when narrated by a period voice: While an omniscient narrator can freely detail a time-scope, if historically situated characters are to convince, they must walk in a world where certain things are taken for granted, where a sense of the conventional emanates from what is not said.

Readers of Cormac James's first book, an historical novel set in the immediate aftermath of the Civil War, will discover in it a curious absence of concentrated Irish history. With no attempt made at temporal scene-setting, the opening of the story is potentially confusing; but the gradual emergence of the ceremonially elemental scenario appears deliberate. Three brothers, Jack, Dan, and the narrator, Jim, drive the remains of their brother from Dublin down to Mitchelstown for a quiet burial. Using a kind of on-the-road structure, organised simply by chapters titled "Night/NightDawn/Early Morning", James gets these three quickly on their journey and manoeuvres them into a sequence of tribulations - blown bridges, army patrols, hostile pub crowds, obstructive ferrymen and numerous roadblocks - all of which have a surprisingly vicious climax. The brothers also manage, as light relief, to fit in some picnicking, a spot of fishing, and a bullet-throwing match before finally, in a somewhat abrupt ending, getting down to solemn duty.

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James's characterisations are not particularly nuanced and his plot is quite static in places, particularly when it involves playful Shakespearean dialogue, the extensive use of which is puzzling. While the main rhetorical feature of repetition also becomes monotonic, the rhythmic flow of James's intensely descriptive style is at times almost mesmeric: "And come summer, the hillsides all around would be gaudy with furze and rape and fields of cabbage lucent blue and striped and scored with ditches of fuschia and buddleia and montebretia, all those exotic refugees from the formal gardens of the local estates and former estates and all the colours would be bright and gaudy and new in the bright light."

While tighter editing could have contracted Track and Field into an even more powerful novella, there is no overwriting of history here; the turbulence of Ireland in the early 1920s is certainly identified, but the retrospective view of the period as abnormal never intrudes on the sense that these characters are driving around in a land that is, to them, utterly familiar. Most importantly - and the involvement of a native publisher may be consequent in this - there is no self-conscious over-determination of Irishness. Amidst the prose of younger Irish men, such quietness is virtually singular.

John Kenny teaches in the English Department, NUI Galway.

Anne Fogarty

The Walled Garden, by Catherine Dunne. Macmillan, 309 pp. £12.99 in UK

Catherine Dunne's novel, The Walled Garden, tells a familiar and archetypal story: an estranged daughter returns to the bedside of her dying, comatose mother in search of reconciliation and self-knowledge. From these formulaic elements, Dunne constructs a compassionate narrative that allows us insight into the dilemmas of the prodigal and defiant daughter, Beth, and the emotional conflicts of her mother, Alice. Successive chapters interweave their different histories and subtly expose their psychic interdependence as well as their long-standing rivalries.

The mother-daughter relationship in this novel is all the more engaging because it is unfolded without resort to sensation. Alice, before a final stroke deprives her forever of speech, records aspects of her life and thoughts in a series of letters addressed to her daughter. The reader is encouraged to share Beth's excitement, trepidation and growing sense of kinship with her mother as she reads through these missives. No dark secrets are sprung upon us. Instead this gently paced text immerses us in the quiet intricacies and muffled disappointments of family interaction.

While the happy ending might seem too readily to subscribe to the pseudo-Freudian belief that a revisiting of the past can therapeutically allay all emotional conflict, it is in keeping with the delicate optimism about female relationships that pervades this novel. At the end, we are convinced that the homecoming that was so much a cause of dread at the outset has led the heroine on a welcome voyage of self-discovery. Home, as Dunne deftly reveals, is a place onto which we project fantasies of salvation as well as of loss.

Although set in a contemporary Dublin suburb, Dunne's novel is curiously placeless and timeless. The appeal of this narrative derives not from its setting or from its sometimes contrived plot but from its ability to depict the contours of ordinary relationships and to uncover the hidden drama of apparently non-dramatic existences. In particular, The Walled Garden movingly renders the complex, guilt-ridden and troubled bonds between mothers and daughters. Unusually, too, for an Irish novel it depicts the family not as a source of tragedy but as the ground for inner renewal.

Anne Fogarty lectures in the English Department of University College, Dublin.